Free Fridays: Follow Me

I hope everyone had a nice 4th of July holiday.  I'm actually posting this at the ending of June, so I'm sending you a blog post from the past (although I suppose that's always the case).  What is it like in the future?

Follow Me is another old story that I walked away from, but when I re-read it to upload it, I realized there's an awful lot I like about it.  There were also a few things I really didn't like about it, but I removed at least some of them.

Follow Me for most eReaders
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I remember that when I wrote this, I was forcing myself to write something in the 3rd person, as I'd just written a lot of stories in the 1st person, and I always feel like that's a bit of a cop out.  Then again, I'm pretty sure that I'm pretty good at writing in the 1st person, which makes sense, as I generally think that anything I'm good at must be inferior in some way.

The characters in this story show up again in other stories by me, most notably two recent stories that I've yet to post.  I'm a sucker for shared universes.